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Mitch suggested I forward this note too the whole crew.
Ted
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Dear Tom,
Thought I would throw my 2 cents in on this one. The bottom-line is
that none of the tag lines "grab" me. The most interesting one is
> 11. Office products from the web to your doodstep
and I assume that "doodstep" is a typo and not a new type of Country
line dance. Seriously, this line has motion to it which I think is
important for your business. However, here are some of my own
thoughts. Please note, I am not an advertising type even though I play
one on TV.....
1) AtYourOffice whenever and wherever you need us
2) AtYourOffice - we're the largest source of office products focused on
the smallest businesses
3) AtYourOffice - efficiency, selection, and price - the solution for
small businesses
4) AtYourOffice - AtYourService, 24,0000 products, 24 hours a day, all
for one business - yours!
5) AtYourOffice - The small business owners choice for office products
and solutions
I hope that this is helpful to you.
Sincerely,
Ted Ritter
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